One Day I Will Fly Away

by Aaron Deevers   Sep 3, 2007


As I sit here watching the clouds float by
I wonder if I could ever float away
Float away to another place
A place that has so much beauty and love
A place for from this hell I live in now

I wonder if I could just set sail
Set sail to nowhere
Let the wind take me where it wants
Maybe I'll try that
Set sail in a little boat

No matter what I do
Floating or sailing away
As long as I leave this place behind
A place that has nothing for me
One day I will fly away

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  • 16 years ago

    by Crystal Gaze

    This has too be one of your best.

    The flow was amazing, the word choice and repetition effective.
    Just a suggestion though. For the last line instead of saying 'One day I will go away' perhaps you should change it too [One day I will fly away].. Then it would intertwine the tittle:)

    5/5 this is one of my fav's.
    Keep it up,
    Elaine.

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