Hey
so dark & black.
a master piece!!!!!!
:)

I love how you're unique and use such detail in your work

I loved this, Dark poems are always the most interesting and intense. Your word choice so deep and powerful, I think I already have you on my favorites if not you will be there shortly as you deserve it. A poem which portrayed great imagery. Well done. ~mel

WOW. That just sucked me into with its dark emotions. The word you use in your poerty is amazing and adds a lot to your poerty. This is one of those poems that lingers with the reader after they finish....*5/5*

Dark imagery galore, found it most pleasing, very well written, good imagery, and a joy to read, only critique at all which isnt meant to be taken badly is that i found it a little hard to follow certain parts, but i still thought it was awesome....

Wow! I love this piece, it has so dark and captivating atmosphere and it is unique and truly powerful. The imagery that you created is truly effective, and I like your choice of words through the whole piece. I can't express how much I like this amazing piece, every line is excellently written.
Keep up, you are very talented poet.

Wow!!! i think WOW, Wallace well done! You should be proud on this, you impressed me in every way and atmosphere in this one is amazing. Your wording is superb and rhythm of it is truly great. You left me without words...

This had a lot of description but little in the merit of a true message. The image you gave was good but where's the core message you are trying to convey to the reader? Plot121

Excellent poem with splendid lexis used and perfect dark imagery :). You have a god gifted talent :) Keep it up wallace

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I don't think there's anything I can say that everyone else hasn't already said.

This is amazing.

The darkness is this piece is beautifully portrayed, such breathtaking imagery wonderfully portrayed, and the whole piece sent so many different emotions through me whilst reading it.

Just..beautiful.

Vocabulary was used well in this.
The depth was overall, the best.
Flow was also very good.
I liked this one a lot. Good work.

A great poem, really well structured and full of abstract and literal meaning nice job xxx alex xxx

VERY INTENSE POEM!!! I enjoyed it very much!!!! I love the way you make something so dark and intense so... hypnotizing!! Very well written!!

Well-written and dark. Too much word-play though. Kills the poem because it makes it look like you've tried too hard.

Wow, this was great. Your extensive vocabulary is evident by your careful diction. You picked the perfect words to capture the darkness of this poem. I look forward to reading more of your work.

Very unique and distinct style of writing; Bravo, I'm extremely impressed by this! Keep up the good work