Crushed

by Wings Of Flames   Sep 7, 2007


Crushed

A flutter in my heart,
A token of our grace,
Take my hand in pity,
And I'll fall back into place,

Any day now,
You'll see the pain,
Any day now,
You'll see the rain,

I'm not in love,
Only of a lost soul,
Dear was your mind,
Now anger has stole,

Take my words now,
Rip them, pull them down,
Please know I'm here,
And I won't let you drown,

My eyes are so pleading,
I pray you must see,
I'm not losing another friend,
All because of me.

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  • 16 years ago

    by ghosts in bloom

    Lovely! A good personal piece oozing emotion. Again, a unique viewpoint - I'm impressed by your way of thinking. The word usage in this poem is ace. Nicely written, sincere, and touching.

    Take Care,
    Smiles,
    *N

  • 16 years ago

    by Grotesque Angel

    Hmm, i dont know if this is good or bad.
    the poem itself was really well written.
    The only prblem i have with you atm is that you keep putting words into my mouth and usually i dont mean anything you say. so if you can find it in yourself to only take in what ive said not what you assume. please.

  • 16 years ago

    by NyellMoonlight

    I like it a lot, greatly written piece with a lot of emotions. Whole poem is very good, from the beginning to the end, and it's very unique.
    My favorite stanzas are:

    -I'm not in love,
    Only of a lost soul,
    Dear was your mind,
    Now anger has stole,

    Take my words now,
    Rip them, pull them down,
    Please know I'm here,
    And I won't let you drown,-

    I like the wording in this poem, and the flow is also great.
    5/5 from me

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