Written in His Heart

by Michael D Nalley   Sep 7, 2007


It was scribed in his heart
Yes, from the very start
As revealed by the word
Often spoken and heard

Laws written in stone
Cannot stand alone
Commit to his love,
Created from above

It was engraved on his bone
He did not want be alone
If you want to be my Eve
Promise me never to leave

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  • 18 years ago

    by Blissful

    I loved this! It was just beautifully written with every word flowing nicely with the next. The rhyming came naturally and nothing seemed forced which made it more of a joy to read. Wonderful job *5/5*

    I also wanted to thank you for your comment on my poem. It means a lot! Happy New Year!

  • 18 years ago

    by Shauna

    Beautiful Writing!!

    5.5**
    <33

  • 18 years ago

    by the come back

    Soo emotional....i love the piece.......soory for the late r/r/c.......5/5 ^_^

  • 18 years ago

    by MakeBelieveLove

    I'd just like to say... Awww... The poem is very sweet and heartwarming. Great Job... 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by PoEtiCmYme

    L loved ur poem
    it woz very heart warming and greatli intepreted in ur own words
    good work .....

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