NO REASON TO LIVE

by Kaz   Sep 8, 2007


Many faces pass me by,
none recognize me as their own,
i try to cry in fear,
knowing that i'm alone,
mist and fog,
blinding me from what's real,
in darkness i walk,
taking every step,
not knowing what i fear,
life and death are two ends i seek,
none in sight,
i still walk alone.

faces i know deny my presence,
so does the reflectiion i see,
in water to find my own,
it's been long ,
since luck knocked at my door,
too late to ask for forgiveness,
for what i was banished for,
mislead myself, my soul, my present,

still trying to find a way out,
a sign of any end i seek,
may it be life or death,
both stand equally denied,
as denies my world ,
my own existence to me,
nothing else i have to offer,
to the ones i pay my debt,
i still stand alone in the same dark spot,
somwhere to spend all what i've left to me,
with remainings of me i continue,
searching here just leading,
a meaningless life..

plzz do cmmnt n rate.. plzzz^^

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  • 16 years ago

    by StormyStar

    Awl! this is so sad! 5/5 lol

  • 16 years ago

    by NyellMoonlight

    You created great atmosphere through the poem, filled with emotions, especially sadness, and expressed your feelings excellently. The flow is little off in some places but that don't ruin whole impression too much. All in all, great job on this piece.
    Keep up, 5/5 from me

  • 16 years ago

    by amelia

    Beautiful poem again !!

    i guess u bring out the reality of life

    that we're born alone... we'll die alone !!

    i guess nothing else matters...

    gr8 work
    keep it up

    thanks for commenting on my poems

    love
    amy

  • 16 years ago

    by Angela

    This is good...
    i love it <3
    E X C E L L E N T
    i am going to read more

  • 16 years ago

    by Xxcrazy4UxX

    I love your poem, its sad but what ever comes from the heart is the best.. im addin' this one to my favorites.. becuase i ablsolutly loved it.. :]

    <3 abby