Take the chance

by Rican Chemistry   Sep 9, 2007


With every second that passes
I start feeling more and more for you
And waiting to hear your voice
Is all I ever want to do

I find myself looking at my phone
To see if I missed your call
Checking every second on myspace
To see if you've been on at all

I know that right now is not the time
That some things are just not right
But I feel I can let go with you
I know that with you, things will be alright

I feel safe with you already
I feel I can really count on you
How can this be, tell me
I barely even know you

But this week has been so crazy
The things we've already talked about
The feeling that you already know me
All my secrets, inside out

I dont know where this will take us
If we even get to start
Just know that day by day
Your slowly winning my heart

I find myself, wanting to please you
To make you laugh just one more time
I cant believe I am saying this
But I somehow wish you were mine

I want to open up to you
I want to see where this might go
I am scared to love again though
As I am pretty sure you already know

But something in me wants to take the chance
Something is telling me go ahead
So I close my eyes, think of you
And smiling, I go to bed

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  • 16 years ago

    by Blacksand

    Great flow I love the imagery, I've felt the exact same way more than once. 5/5 Keep it up!

  • 16 years ago

    by ABake

    Aww. I really liked this. I felt like I was writing it. Lol. But great job. Your flow was flawless and the emotions expressed were beautiful Overall, spectacular job!
    5/5

    Amber...

  • 16 years ago

    by dora

    Heyy aww this was soo beautiful i really liked this poem, especially this verse:
    "I find myself looking at my phone
    To see if I missed your call
    Checking every second on myspace
    To see if you've been on at all"
    i no exactly wht u mean great job xx

  • 16 years ago

    by ABake

    I love it! It is so cute and I can relate to this tremendously. (sp) Lol. But your flow is flawless and your overall concept is amazing. I can really feel some emotion in this. Great job!
    5/5

    Amber..

  • 16 years ago

    by Kayla

    This is such a beautiful poem. In so many ways, I can connect to this. I have been through this and am actually going through it right now. I even wrote my own poem like this one.. it's very amazing. You have a way with words and I loved every single line. It's so organized and neatly written. Great job! Please keep up the excellent work! 5/5 <3 <3 <3

    ~Rikku~

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