My first love added to my pain
by Lost in Life Sep 12, 2007
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You said you loved me, it's been all summer now and things are getting worse I love you too but, yesterday you made me wanna burst. The tears I produce and the blood I shed are better than putting a bullet in my head. I guess it's over like you said but for me it's another bump in my rocky life that I can't and probly won't ever get over! |
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16 years ago
A lot of emotion short but to the point. you did a good job. hope things work out for you.
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16 years ago
Wow, this is so full of pain and sadness and this is one poem that I relate to way to much =( Been there, am still there and I know that it doesn't feel like but the pain does deminish a little after a while =( Great emotions flowing through this piece and I hope it gets better for you soon ^_^ 5/5
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16 years ago
by Lost in Life
Why did i put great ?!?!?! i meant yeah a lot of emotions here it was a bad time
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16 years ago
by Lost in Life
Great a lot of emotions here
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16 years ago
by Jade
I don't think it's crap. I think its really swell. Your really talented
