Global Poison

by Natalie84   Sep 12, 2007


Fighting against each other
Instead of fighting together
Killing our brothers
Betraying our father

Life was not created
For us to take for granted
But war was instated
Now this place has been tainted
The heart of our world, now infected
Minds of children, endlessly polluted

Forget the fiction movies
Check the news on TV
It isn't difficult to see
The devil's hand being set free

A president of evil
Commencing combat with the rival
Herding troops like slaved cattle
Lives carlessly thrown in peril
Murdering each other
War, it's legal

**This is a piece I wrote a long time ago. When I was "TRYING" to venture into a new style. No one's ever read it so I wanted to share it. 1/30/07

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  • 18 years ago

    by Shokry Al Qubati

    Super great :) 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Nix

    So powerful message and topic is excellent. You wrote it on a truly fantastic way, very creative and filed with greatly expressed emotions. Well done, you should be proud on this meaningful piece.

  • 18 years ago

    by Shauna

    Great work!

    5.5**
    <3

  • 18 years ago

    by OHgreenman

    First, thank you for sharing this piece...it has a very truthful message...loved the flow and word usage throughout this beautifully penned piece.

  • 18 years ago

    by Angie

    This packs a powerful punch Nat.... Thanks so much for sharing it with us, the words, I'm sorry to say, are so true....

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