Look past the mask

by Angela   Sep 12, 2007


Shes a hidden mistake
Everyone knows her name
But none has took-en the time our day to talk to her
She doesn't know what to do
But she knows this mask she wears is killing her
Its pushing her off a cliff
Its pushing her off a roof
She doesn't know where she is falling
But she can tell she is falling far
Far down
And she doesn't know when this pain is going to stop
Our if this pain is going to stop at all
She doesn't really know when she started feeling like this
But she doesn't know its going to end soon
Possibly in a week
Maybe by the end of the month
But she doesn't know what to do
And she doesn't want to wait for this pain to end
She thinks nightly
About the best solution
How could she go
But wait;;
She gets a thought threw her head
She thinks about her mother
The lady that is oh so special to her
She doesn't want to leave her all alone in this world
She might not make it a night without her baby girl
Maybe one day soon her mother will know she is hurting
Her mother will know she isn't OK
And she needs help
But for now
She is forced to wear this mask
She is forced to pretend....
She is going to try and reach out for help

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  • 15 years ago

    by Mister 47

    Mm let me say to you this !! frist the eye run from big box of words and line so plit and structure to paragraphs and add rhyming it is a poem even you can call it free style it have it rules

    i can read your feelings but try to make them organised

    listen i enjoy listneing to music that male me feel same way of the song it help me feel the moment and w=find the words hope it helps

  • 16 years ago

    by J u l e s

    This is very very deep but beautiful <33

  • 16 years ago

    by william

    Sometimes help is hard 2 find on your own. i hope you find it

  • 16 years ago

    by Angela

    Thanks for the comments.
    they mean alot to me.
    it makes me relize i can do better im working on one right now.
    but i want it alot better then this one.
    because i know i can do.
    because these comments inspire me.
    they give me hope they give me faith
    thanks.

  • 16 years ago

    by Cindy

    Nice poem...i really like it alot....very well written..great job...~*~Cindy~*~