Things I'm not sure about

by Alone in the crowd   Sep 12, 2007


There are certain things that I'm not sure about
and the are now loudly shouting out,
everything is so new and amazing
and i know its not just another fling
I'm torn apart by the simple words that you say to me
and i wish that i could believe you when you say that we should be
I try to make sense of what I'm feeling and all the things that you're saying to me
but with the tears that are coming down, make it hard to see
I want to believe you when you tell me that you have never felt this way about anyone
but i cant help but think that I'm not the only one
there are some things that I'm not sure about
and sadly enough i;m beginning to doubt
Think is through and you'll see
that I'm scared to love you

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  • 16 years ago

    by Beautiful Forever

    Oh, such a beautiful concept. Decently written (grammar!!!) and the flow was nice. I really think the ending was the best part. Definitely put a clincher on this poem! 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Kristina

    This poem is simply amazing. I'm sure a lot of people can relate to this.. wondering about the same things. It flowed really nicely and read perfectly. Keep it up! 5/5

    ~Kristina

  • 16 years ago

    by AJ Irving

    That was great

  • 16 years ago

    by elmahdy

    Love ur poems really cute and perfect :D

  • 16 years ago

    by elmahdy

    Wow i love this one so much, great words , so high feeelings full of emotion and written by so talented poet ;)

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