The Way Your Head Feels As It Falls Apart

by CaffeineBomb   Sep 13, 2007


I'm becoming dangerous
Can't you see the things I can throw at you?
I'm becoming evil
Can't you see that I will come and tear out your eyes?
The paper shredded, devastation
The music keeps on pounding 'til the bleeding starts
The bleeding washes ink from fingers
This is the way your head feels as it falls apart

You can shout
But I can shout louder
There's more in my past to feel guilty of
You can try
But I can try harder
To push you away so that you're better off
Without me

Nails bitten down to the white
Nothing can ever be right

I'm becoming dangerous
All malevolence is directing through me
Nothing else is real
Can't you see that I will rip out your insides?
The loneliness, its penetration
And I will keep on screaming 'til the noise cuts out
The silence that is generated
Crackles like it waits for something to give out

You can shout
But I can shout louder
There's more in my past to feel guilty of
You can try
But I can try harder
To push you away so that you're better off
Without me

Lost to the absence of light
Nothing can ever be right
It bears down on me, with all its might
And I'm losing a part of myself tonight

The final, p***ed off conversation
It carries on until there's nothing to say
Burnt out, its acrid taste still lingers
My head is a wreck and that's how it will stay

You can shout
But I can shout louder
There's more in my past to feel guilty of
You can try
But I can try harder
To push you away so that you're better off
Without me

Without me

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  • 16 years ago

    by Teryl Rae

    Howsume

  • 16 years ago

    by NyellMoonlight

    Wow, this is very intense and powerful. Greatly written dark poems, with the emotions excellently expressed and very good atmosphere in it. Whole flow of this piece is great. Truly unique poem.
    My favorite stanza is:

    -Lost to the absence of light
    Nothing can ever be right
    It bears down on me, with all its might
    And I'm losing a part of myself tonight-

    The repetition of the second stanza through the poem is very effective.
    Keep up, 5/5 from me