by babblingxbrooke   Sep 13, 2007

Why is it him who is always on your mind day and night?
why is it him you long for when you know in your heart it can't be right?

why is it him that you want so badly but you know you deserve more?
why is it him that has you questioning and making you so unsure?

why is it him who is beginning to influence you in ways so hard to explain?
why is it him you let your impatient feelings fall on, and now they are to blame?

why is it him that has you thinking things over?
why is it him who has you wishing on every star, 11:11, and four leaf clover?

why is it him that has you seeing life in a whole new way?
why is it him that has you acting and thinking in different ways?

why is it him that makes you search for these answers, just wanting to know?
why is it him that has nothing to say, no answers to show?


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  • 13 years ago

    by ABake

    This was adorable. I really liked the "bouncy" feel that I had while reading it. The emotions expressed were very true.
    Great job!


  • 13 years ago

    by Tylor

    Whoa, great, fantastic, wonderful poem, the rhyming is thought out very well, and it connects with the rest of the poem, every line, is written very, exceptionally well.

  • 13 years ago

    by kla


    i heart the line

    with wishin on everystar,11:11 and four leaf clvoer i love that i can relate<333


  • 13 years ago

    by Xx Eternal Fantasy xX

    Aww lotsa girls can relate to this. you did a great job with this. keep it up =) 5/5

    ps thanks for commenting my poem, it means a lot that you took the time to read my work =) <3

  • 13 years ago

    by Of Sweet Insanity

    I swear that this is the best, well written, truest, once again BEST poem I've read that goes along the lines of this subject. It was beautiful and I can totally relate. 5/5!
    ~!~ VaNiLLa PaiN ~!~