Too Real..

by Reem   Sep 14, 2007


She could still feel his touch torturing and teasing..
The ache for his body in hers increasing..
He's dead she knew
for something inside her died too
Too much damage is done
and she just couldn't break through!!
she Kept calling his name
wishing that it might ease the pain
For All of this has been just too real
too much wounds for her to heal..

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  • 16 years ago

    by cory

    It was so sad so as a poet u succeeded on this 1. keep it up. 5/5 i wish i could give it more.

    Cory

  • 16 years ago

    by babblingxbrooke

    Aw, short but filled with so much emotion...nice job!

    Brooke<3

  • 16 years ago

    by Baby Rainbow

    Very good work, well done x