Granddad...

by NoBeauty   Sep 14, 2007


Granddad died...
He`s gone...
I have cried ...and cried...he`s gone
But...
What`s that done...
I only miss him...
I only wish him back...
Is that so much to ask?..
I wish i had a chance...
To get to know him for a start...
I never had a proper relation...
We only ever spoke on a occasion...
Even then we still hadn`t a relation...
Never a proper one...
Still forever he`s gone...
No matter now, how many cries, sent his way...
Before it was so loud, i still never realized,
how much love there was for each thing he`d say...
A day never passed away
he`d never enjoy the company,
of his much loved family...
It`s amazing
seeming so real...
actually never ever
seeing him breathe...
again...
Ive never felt this feeling
i know i`m lucky to breathe
i just don't feel so lucky
When my granddad ain't breathing

least rate don't take a second !!!!!!!!
but really appreciative if u comment ill comment on your poems tho i do that anyway but in case i haven't read your poems anyway ill make an extra effort 4 u

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  • 16 years ago

    by Shirani Graham

    SpeciaL ideaS meanS..... granD dad'S possesS thoughtS oF olD storieS thaT noW treateD tO thiS worlD aS golD.... granD daD'S arE mucH preciouS iN givinG usefuL poweR tO theiR granD childrenS. sO iN shorT i wrotE thaT aS speciaL ideaS.... reallY meanS.. theY arE valuablE propertY tO thE worlD whereaS thiS centurY futurE granD dad'S cannoT achievE tO theiR statuD oR standardS (4 surE)......

    sO takinG thE abovE intO consideratioN... simplY i narrateD aS speciaL ideaS onLy thE olD granD dad'S coulD havE anD noT thE currenT oR thE futurE centurieS one'S...

  • 16 years ago

    by Shirani Graham

    ThiS meanS speciaL ideaS.... 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Baby Rainbow

    Awww he realy meant a lot to you, im sorry to read this, hope your ok. keep writing xxxxxx

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