Thier fault

by TillyMariex   Sep 15, 2007


People ask me why
i cut my wrists the way i do
tonight i shall give them the answer
i cut myself all because of you

i cut and i bleed
i cry and i scream
but no matter what
you'll never love me

the knife whispers lies to me
"I'll help you end the pain"
but at the time i was too blind to see
this knife is the reason I'm going insane

it's all my fault
I'm the one to blame
but what about all the people
who put me through this pain?

their not innocent
their the the reason i cut
it's all their fault
my life is messed up

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  • 16 years ago

    by TwistedAngel xx

    First of all the title is misspelled. Just thought you'd like to know.

    "the knife whispers lies to me
    "I'll help you end the pain"
    but at the time i was too blind to see
    this knife is the reason I'm going insane"

    the end was a bit long. maybe shorten it
    eg.

    "the knife whispers lies to me
    I'll help you end the pain
    But at the time I was to blind to see
    That the knife made me insane"

    or something like that.
    You dont have to change it I'm just throwing it out there.

    I really enjoyed the poem though and well done!

    ^_^

    xx

  • 16 years ago

    by BeautifulLetdown

    Very good. i know how u feel...been there. keep it up!!! 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Veamm

    Excellent!

    Nicely done, well penned!

    keep it up!

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