Nice 5/5

I also first read this in the competition forum and it captivated me! Goes straight to the favourites and I'm very keen to check out some more of your work, you have amazing talent.

Sam

I...I don`t even know what to say right now; need a minute to catch my breath lol. Wow, just wow...this is absolutely amazing..too short, needs more, I want to read more ! Lol..very good job Darling, I am speechless, yet again.

5.5
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Very eerie but in an amazing way! i loved it! so deep and sooo well put..good job..take care

Marilyn~

The flow in this was wonderful. It was quite a dark poem, eerie, yes. It was short, but perfect that way. Told a story; a dark tale, if you like. I loved it. :]

O.O
I am stunned into silence at the awesomeness of this poem.
ok so that was a little overdramatic but I really don't know what to say except I loved it.
definite 5/5