To the man i knew

by jennifer chalifour   Sep 15, 2007


To the man i thought i knew

hello i am writing you this to tell you how much i miss you and the way you look at me and touch me i long for that touch and i wish i could feel it again but it seems to me that i have lost that because of things i have done to you and i am truly sorry about that but i just wish you would look into your heart again and try to get back the feelings that you had before all of this happened i know that i have hurt you so bad but please forgive all i have to offer you is i am so sorry and to show you how much i love you but on the other hand you removed your wedding band a bond that is never meant to be broken so on that same hand you hurt me and i don't want you to hurt all i want to do is love you but yet you wont Let me so where does this leave us at a cross road and you have to make a choice to make and that is do you want to respect our vows and love each other the way we did or go a whole different way, i am leaving that in your hand so the ball is in your court...

love your wife

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  • 15 years ago

    by Dark Savior

    This is a very emotional poem. it's truly what I think saved it from a little bit of grammarical issue's here and there.

    I think that the structure could have been improved abit, changing it into stanza's would have helped.

    I think that this is a really good...and sad poem. It's really something that you should cheerish..it's to bad something like this had to happen for you to write such a piece.

    There are plenty of fish in the sea as the saying goes.

  • 16 years ago

    by jennifer chalifour

    Sorry i spelled a word wrong i met lie

  • 16 years ago

    by jennifer chalifour

    It will not because he wants to live to my face

  • 16 years ago

    by Baby Rainbow

    Hope all works out, good work xx

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