A man chooses

by my demons   Sep 16, 2007


A man chooses
A dog obeys
I didn't want a friend
I wanted a master
I was no one
When you called I followed
You hit me i licked your wounds
A man chooses
A dog obeys
I am no one

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  • 16 years ago

    by amandalynn

    Good poem.

  • 16 years ago

    by Oracle

    Again, you did it! in a way i think i understood it. from my pov, i felt it. but i might have felt something other than what you were trying to point out. for me, it was as if being useless or alone, you seek comfort and a usefulness. like we all need a purpose, or we feel empty. idk, that is part of what i got from it. the other just seems too obvious to point out. well done. i loved this one better.

  • 16 years ago

    by cory

    Wow that was deep i know exactly what it ment. 5/5 good job.