I Don't Understand

by Leah   Sep 16, 2007


I don't understand all your lies, your hate,
They're wrong, but when you realise it'll be too late,
Because I would have slipped away from you,
And there won't be nothing that you could do,

I don't understand the way you are,
You have hurt me now, it's gone too far,
And you never did anything but doubt me,
But now I'm stronger than you'll ever be,

I don't understand your twisted mind,
And I'm sick of hearing all of your lies,
And it seems that you have never told me the truth,
And right now I hate you,

I don't understand what you're like,
Are you happy now you've messed up my life?
I can't believe that I could never see,
That you were never there for me,

I don't understand anything about you,
After all that we've been through,
I don't wanna let you near me,
Now you're making it hard for me to breathe,

I don't understand why I trusted you,
It hurts so much when you disaprove,
And now I'm going forever,
And I won't think about you, not now, not ever.

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  • 16 years ago

    by dhaxeeh

    It is a very sad poem hope you find the right person that you can share your life with. hope you write again another poem

  • 16 years ago

    by Matthew Betts

    Leah.

    This is a very well thought of poem, but if i may offer my advice....

    1. Try not to ure repetative word where they are not needed, unless this was particularly how you wanted the poem scripted. What i mean by this is that many of your lines begin with the word "and".

    2. When i write a poem, if i am planning on writing slanged words into it, i try and majorities the poem with them, when u simply have 1 or 2, it looks more like your only writing due to necessity rather than want. example:- "And there won't be nothing that you could do" here you could have simply written "And there wouldn't be anything that you could do!", last point i might bring up is to use expressive punctuation, IE:- ! ? etc

    Apart from that, i gave you 5/5 for thought, expression (through your words) and talent.

    Cant wait to read more of your work.

    Matt

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