These Thoughts

by Jenna   Sep 16, 2007


I have so many things to say
its just to hard to explain.
i don't want to scare you baby,
cause then i know you'll leave me.

the thoughts that have been going through my mind
are making my sense of direction blind.
i love you dearly
but its just these stupid thoughts.

i promised you no more harm
but these thoughts just want me gone.
I'm trying to hold on my dear,
but these thoughts are hard to stay clear.

please don't leave me
i wouldn't know how to survive.
just please help me through this time.

i love you my dear
please believe me,
help me please see clearly.

take these thoughts
and help me through,
I'm so sorry don't mean to scare you.

please baby,
help me hold on
don't leave me,
then I'll be gone too...

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i don't really like this, I'm going through this stage again
not knowing whats going on w/ myself...needed to get my feelings out.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Teria

    I like it a lot, honestly. I think it's a great poem. Of course I can relate to it a lot. Maybe not in the way you wrote it, but in the way I take it.
    There's a guy I like, and it's all complicated And I'm just confused with life.
    Which is kind of what this is saying, but not. :/
    Make sense?

    Good (:

    Amazing (:

    5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Keith

    Well i think its good even if you dont :)
    and thanks for the comment
    how are you?

  • 16 years ago

    by cory

    I liked it. i think the best poems are strait from the heart like this 1.it deserves a 5/5.

    Cory

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