Far away gran

by Baby Rainbow   Sep 16, 2007


I feel so close to you
but your not really here
it feels like I'll lose you
thats my biggest fear

one day I'll wake up in bed
to live that day without you
but the truth is that if you left
I'd have no one else to get me through

i love you gran i really do
i love you more than i could say
and i hate feeling this close
to a gran so far away.

saffie
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  • 16 years ago

    by Spoken Silence

    "I feel so close to you
    but your not really here
    it feels like I'll lose you
    thats my biggest fear"

    I can so relate to this, I feel this way right now. and I know many people will understand and relate to this. This was such a strong way to start this poem.

    "but the truth is that if you left
    I'd have no one else to get me through "

    So honest so true, and yet again I can relate.

    "i love you gran i really do
    i love you more than i could say
    and i hate feeling this close
    to a gran so far away."

    So sweet, this poem is one of the sweetest I've ever read!