Mirror

by Rebecca Marie   Sep 16, 2007


I look in the mirror

What do I see

nothing much

who is she

I don't know her

why is she there

whats her problem

she looks so scared

Maybe its her mother

or maybe her dad

I don't know

she looks so sad

she looks exhausted

she needs some sleep

Oh look at her now

as she starts to weep

Maybe its her brother

or sister too

I'm not sure

Is there anything I can do

I look in the mirror

What do I see

Nothing much

Is that really me?

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  • 17 years ago

    by NeverBroken

    I really liked this one, it's actually almost exactly what I used to think. Keep writing.

    :)

  • 17 years ago

    by XxMoonLightxX

    Very good job
    a very nice flow...and i liked how you ended it saying the same thing you started out with only adding "is that really me?"

    its a great way to end a pome
    but as a suggestion
    maybe add some more....feeling to it
    try finding words to put into your poems that have more emotion to them
    ya know what i mean

    a very well written poem though
    i liked it!

    if you get the chance
    read my new poem
    Imaginary Light
    thanks!

    ~Shannon~