Fountain of life

Beautiful write, with a very important message.

"the way water lets nothing stand in it's way
and that all things are possible if you pull together
there's a lesson to learn from all things in nature
most of them you will remember forever"

I just love that part, reminds you that everything serves a purpose. Such amazing imagery throughout the poem and so descriptive. Probably one of my favourites of yours, i really enjoyed it and it genuinly brought a smile to my face, so thanks:)

Kelly
xx

PROFOUND!!! KUDOS!!! one of the best poems ive read since i joined this sight!!!
omg! so mentally visual! pure, keep up the work!!

read some of my newest ones please, tell your friends about mine too!! :)

Very deep, imagery is excellent and atmosphere is also great. You expressed so many feelings in to this one and topic is good, very original. Well done, this piece has many fantastic lines.

Beautifully written and very touching poem, with a lot of emotions inside and greatly created imagery. Whole piece has very unique atmosphere. I really enjoy in tour poems, Tracy.
5/5 from me
My favorite lines are:

-the amazing part is at the end of the fall
is how God pumps it all back to the top
a never ending continuous running fountain
for each time the water comes down it brings-

Wow.. really beautifu.. i think people should read this.. something what the world has frgttn.. nature.. a gr8 gift we dont appreciate.. and u express it describe it.. in such a beautifull way....