Fountain of life

by Tracy D Rollings   Sep 17, 2007


Have you ever stood and looked at a waterfall
as the water comes rushing to the bottom
nothing in it's path seems to slow it at all
trickling downward to the end of it's destination
the pure beauty and magnificent sounds it makes
can really take your breath away if you listen
with your mind and heart nature will carry you away
the amazing part is at the end of the fall
is how God pumps it all back to the top
a never ending continuous running fountain
for each time the water comes down it brings
precious memories with it that for ever stick in your mind
the way water lets nothing stand in it's way
and that all things are possible if you pull together
there's a lesson to learn from all things in nature
most of them you will remember forever..©2007 Tracydr42

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  • 16 years ago

    by Kelly

    Beautiful write, with a very important message.

    "the way water lets nothing stand in it's way
    and that all things are possible if you pull together
    there's a lesson to learn from all things in nature
    most of them you will remember forever"

    I just love that part, reminds you that everything serves a purpose. Such amazing imagery throughout the poem and so descriptive. Probably one of my favourites of yours, i really enjoyed it and it genuinly brought a smile to my face, so thanks:)

    Kelly
    xx

  • 16 years ago

    by NytherHerenorTher The hooded poet

    PROFOUND!!! KUDOS!!! one of the best poems ive read since i joined this sight!!!
    omg! so mentally visual! pure, keep up the work!!

    read some of my newest ones please, tell your friends about mine too!! :)

  • 16 years ago

    by Nix

    Very deep, imagery is excellent and atmosphere is also great. You expressed so many feelings in to this one and topic is good, very original. Well done, this piece has many fantastic lines.

  • 16 years ago

    by NyellMoonlight

    Beautifully written and very touching poem, with a lot of emotions inside and greatly created imagery. Whole piece has very unique atmosphere. I really enjoy in tour poems, Tracy.
    5/5 from me
    My favorite lines are:

    -the amazing part is at the end of the fall
    is how God pumps it all back to the top
    a never ending continuous running fountain
    for each time the water comes down it brings-

  • 16 years ago

    by Kaz

    Wow.. really beautifu.. i think people should read this.. something what the world has frgttn.. nature.. a gr8 gift we dont appreciate.. and u express it describe it.. in such a beautifull way....

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