For you i will fight

by HollywoodSmile   Sep 17, 2007


'sing me your song
lets play all night long

give me a quick fix
let our sweetness mix

pretend were all alone
skin to skin, back at home...'

my fantasies come to an end
as a granade explodes inside a friend

war is not a pretty sight
but for my country i will fight

above i see no stars
but a fighter plane, not really sure weather or not its ours

it feels as though hours have passed
but no time has elapsed

when will this be done
so i can go home, filled with joy that we have won

i dont know that i will live
but i will fight for you

(for my lover)

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  • 15 years ago

    by Im not broken anymore

    I really love this one.. zI think you did great as the poem its self but you really put the picture in our minds an in a way we all can compare...

  • 15 years ago

    by philip

    That sums up war which is hard for people who have never had a loved one go to war for their country............................definate 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by AJ Irving

    Im back & I realy enjoyed this poem. I give you 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by bethany

    That was really great. i loved the way you compared soldiers fighting for our country to you fighting for your lover. excellent poem. it made me think. also, thank you so much for your comment.

    B. Bridges
    *lets change this world*

  • 16 years ago

    by Im not broken anymore

    This is Excellent... Really great job girl do you mind if i use this at school for something...

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