Faking Your Forgotten

by Tim   Sep 20, 2007


Slowly waking
arms start shaking
once i relise I'm back here
back to faking
the life I'm making
where your lies are crystal clear
forever stating
that I'm hating
everything you touch
compensating
for who your dating
who i hate so much
always trying
never buying
with everything i see
constant crying
hopeful of you dieing
so your forgotten........
before me

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  • 16 years ago

    by Marylou L

    Wonderful work. your piece worked really well. i know this feeling all 2 well

  • 16 years ago

    by Lauren

    Hey, this is a great poem, i got chills reading it. nice work
    xx

  • 16 years ago

    by Melody Christina

    Nice poem , the flow is perfect, very sad yet powerfull! 5/5 keep up the good work .....Melody..=)

  • 16 years ago

    by NyellMoonlight

    This poem has interesting rhythm and many greatly expressed emotions.
    I like the way you wrote it.

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