Heartbreak = Suicide

by Vanessa Ann   Sep 20, 2007


Please kill me now
You know you don't love me
So why do u keep me
In your grip
My wrists are done
Bleeding over you
My eyes are all teared out
I'm done caring about you
When you don't even notice me
I thought it was love
I thought It was something at least
You could have told me it was over
You could have given me a sign
But I guess love sucks like that sometimes

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  • 16 years ago

    by AmberSherrellxxIve Been Sitting Here Trying To Find Myselfxx

    Ummm...other then the fact that in the title you spelled 'suicide' wrong,I guess I can't find anything to say.It was too short and plain for my liking but all in all I reckon(excuse my southern slang)it was a alright poem.4/5

    <3Amber

  • 16 years ago

    by LiViNg To DiE

    I love this poem...
    i can so totally relate...
    :(:(:(
    yes love is painfull but when you fall in love it is wonderful...
    dont let a man pull you down...
    just be strong and be yourself and the right guy is out there for you...
    :):):)
    great poem
    5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by CWG

    This is a good poem but don't let anyone destoy you. You are a beautiful child of God and if u turn to him in times of need he Will always give you the strength to pull through.

  • 16 years ago

    by Hermosa

    Wow....hope you didnt really have to go through that about the poem very strong feelings good job

  • 16 years ago

    by JayJ

    Geese, you must be going threw some shit...but i must say I feel the same way sometimes. I feel for ya' 5/5 from me!

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