Lovers dying

by Baby Rainbow   Sep 20, 2007


Flying in the sky
soaring so high
drifting through the air
as a lovers pair

on a cloud they land
standing hand in hand
what a perfect fairytale
that seems so frail

a story of two
who always knew
the love they send
would have to end

saffie
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  • 16 years ago

    by FlawlesslyTarnished

    Short. sad. && well written.
    5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Wings Of Flames

    This poem seemed incomplete in the end to me. a bit cliche as well.
    but if it means something deep to you then it shouldnt matter what i think :)
    keep rockin :)
    thanks for the comment on my poem goodnight kiss
    xxoo

  • 16 years ago

    by YourThe ReasonIDiedTonight

    It was really good keep up the amazing work...5/5

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