Thoughts

This is so heartbreaking and so elegantly written at the same time.
You managed to pack a lot of emotion and depth into a relatively short piece, and the ending was beautiful, it wrapped it up perfectly.

I like this one alot :)

Again, I don't think this packed enough
punch to be this short, it feels like it needs
to be more lengthy. Explore your feelings
more in depth ... but still a heartfelt write.

Take Care,
Smiles,
*N

Very sad, hope you not sad as the poem.

Hug and smile,
Pam