I love the style that you went with for this one, very unique and effective at the same time...and yes, we all have sleepless nights so, im sure many people can relate to this one, keep up the good work!!

Your poems are very powerful because of your descriptive language. It creates images of beauty in such simple objects and imagry of complex emotions.
5.5 im going to read some more because im considering you for my favs list. which may mean i may consequently have to delete someone for YOU!
:)

I wish it was that easy to get rid of insomnia. i can't get to sleep easily at night. My mind just wont stop thinking.

Sorry about the poem it was really good
5

Wow, you write such unique poems. I really love them! I'm going to definitely be reading more!!! You always manage to take the simplist of things and turn them into amazing strong poems in words that really pull a reader in. Great Job!

Wow. you are an amazing poet. you can take something so simple and make it so grand. i could tell it was a canopy until you said that. i am going to read it again. =]

another 5 out of 5.

Good!

for this one, i did'nt catch my attention well, but its another great piece of yours..the words usage and the flow is right..much effort is given..

keep it up!

I didnt understand all but it was good. I like your poems.

It was a treat to read. totally different and unique from the normal poetic expression I read from others. Your descriptions brought the poem to life and made it very imaginable. well done 5/5

The pocket fiend!

I really had no idea what it was about until it said at the end. But that's not a bad thing!!! I loved the way it was written,
5/5

-*onyx*

First thing that came to my mind: UNIQUE! LOL I never read anything about this topic. =) It was great to read an original piece. Anyway, simple but able to convey tons of thoughts. 5/5

The idea was different. But again, your imagry is amazing. Your flow was off, but I enjoyed reading the peice. Great job!
5/5

Amber...

I absolutely love it when people make great work out of simple objects. i read this poem by robert pinsky( i think) and i loved it because it was just about 3 letters, XYZ. i always get off track in my comments. haha. great job!

Very unique and descriptive....metaphorically awesome! All the best, Debbie

Very nice. 5/5.

I really like the uniqueness of your poems, good job. It's really good to read something unique nowadays. I think it flowed well, well done.