Dance of the Spheres

by sibyllene   Sep 23, 2007


I spotted God the other night
turning a corner in my mind

and where he walked, Eternity unfolded
like a burning lily
that consumes, even as it
blossoms

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  • 16 years ago

    by Sungrl And Mrs Whatsit

    .....and so it goes....

  • 16 years ago

    by sibyllene

    Are you reading Freudian sexual undertones into my work again, Jane dear?

  • 16 years ago

    by silvershoes

    OH really now, sweetness ;) Haha, only wish I could have read this with you, in person. Would've been fun for you to see my reaction. Great poem, but it kind of got consumed by the flower imagery, ha.

    Keep it up, chica.

  • 16 years ago

    by Andrew Morton

    "I spotted God the other night"

    that line is flawless...so..wow, cant find a word...and just how you used it to open it made ths poem amazing, keep it up

    andrew

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