Written With Emotions

by Italian Stallion   Sep 23, 2007


Written with emotions,
Love should always be.
No matter what,
People always say.

Hands will meet,
And hearts will mend.
Love songs will be chosen,
Just for ours to be.

Radiant smiles
Illuminate the sky,
Revealing a beautiful star,
In which I've named for you.

The star is bright,
It's such a beautiful sight
Against the moonlight,
Just as you're to me.

You took my hand,
And Held it close.
You took my heart,
And never let go.

I've loved you from the very start,
And will continue no matter what.
You're my heart, my joy and soul,
And I want to marry only you.

*Written for a Contest*

© Copyright 2007 By: Italian Stallion

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  • 16 years ago

    by judith redmount

    With or without emotion, I guess love will always be.
    i like the part where you have written
    - Hands will meet,
    And hearts will mend.-
    You are very talented.

  • 16 years ago

    by Lets Keep it A Surprise

    The star is bright,
    It's such a beautiful sight
    Against the moonlight,
    Just as you're to me.

    This stanza I could vivdly picture then all the rest :)

    This poem brought a smile to my face, and the flow was tender and smooth :)

    5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Ingrid

    I've loved you from the very start,
    and will continue no matter what

    Now these are words every girl likes to hear, hehe!
    Very beautiful poem by you, Joe!

    Take care,

    5/5 Ingrid

  • 16 years ago

    by Blissful

    This was truly a sweet and loving poem. The simplicity in which you wrote with was flawless and enjoyable to read. Althought I do think the flow was a bit rocky in parts, you made up for it with you warm emotions.

    "Radiant smiles
    Illuminate the sky,
    Revealing a beautiful star,
    In which I've named for you."
    ^I loved the imagery you painted in my mind with these words.

    Well done *5/5*

  • 16 years ago

    by Ingrid

    I really loved the last stanza, it shows real devotion for your girlfriend. Great poem, Joe!

    Best wishes,

    5/5 Ingrid

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