I'm Feeling

by Pete   Sep 24, 2007


I'm feeling this something,
It's strange and it's new.
I'm feeling this something,
Entirely for you.

I'm feeling connected,
I'm finding my place.
No more feeling dejected,
When I look at your face.

I'm feeling so sure,
That I'll never be harmed.
I'm feeling secure,
When I'm in your arms.

I'm feeling content,
This feeling's so real.
Nothing contends,
With the feelings I feel.

I blink and I miss you,
Always on my mind.
I wish I could kiss you,
All of the time.

I'm feeling so free,
With no earthly constraints.
It's easy to see,
I can have no complaints.

Yet your smile's faded,
You don't seem the same.
Your features are jaded,
Your feelings have changed?

You're dodging my touch,
Turn your head from my kiss.
I'm feeling so much,
When you're feeling like this.

I just want to hold you,
Let you know that I care.
Let you know that I love you,
And I'll always be there.

I was feeling safe,
Now I'm feeling concerned
Because the look on your face,
Says my feelings are spurned.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Cella Bella

    Oh, I loved the way it ended. It was a nice twist to what seemed, at first, to be a very sweet love poem. I love this stanza,
    "Yet your smile's faded,
    You don't seem the same.
    Your features are jaded,
    Your feelings have changed?"
    You rhyme so well while keeping to the point, they never seem forced, I'm jealous. Rhyming is something I struggle with in my poetry, it always seems off to me. That's just between you and me though lol. Another 5.5

    marcella

  • 16 years ago

    by Jenna

    I really LOVE this poem, the flow of it was beautiful and the words used was very good! keep up the wonderful work. 5/5 from me hun,

    MickeysBabyGurl

  • 16 years ago

    by Rowena Smith

    Great poem I love it!

  • 16 years ago

    by Lisa

    Hey Pete,

    well all I can say is wow...thats talent...really deep poem, loved it.

  • 16 years ago

    by Jenni Marie

    Oh holy ****
    I frikken loved this...so much raw emotion and depth throughout the whole piece...beautiful ending, it was the perfect way to wrap up this heartfelt piece...beautifully written.

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