It really is over?

by Always and Never   Sep 28, 2007

Please comment this poem. I'm about to give it the guy, but I want to know what other people think. Thank you

It really does hurt Eli,
It hurts me to say goodbye,
I had to fight my tears back so hard.
I wasn't going to give in and cry.

It really is over isn't it?
Too bad it ended this way.
You left me with so many questions sweetheart,
I still had so much to say.

But I'm tired of coming in second,
Or in my case, coming in third.
But what hurts me the most baby,
Is that I lost you (my best friend) to her.

All I can do now love,
Is try to mend my broken heart.
And by erasing you completely,
Is where I think I must start.

I won't ever forget you though,
Because you made me so happy at times.
But we are no longer Jesse and Eli,
You are no longer mine.

I have to pick up my own broken pieces,
And put my heart together one by one.
You are now free from me baby,
Go out and have some fun.

Go out and be crazy,
Live your life free.
But promise me one thing before I go my love,
Promise to never forget me.


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  • 14 years ago

    by Fiend in the Iron Maiden

    Once again, very sorry for that happening...but you did get a good poem out of it

    I have been through some pretty tough break up's

    always broke my heart but you know what?

    "Can't let life get you down else it won't let you get back up"

    You know?

    Find that sliver lineing and hold on tight to it dear and eehhhh it don't hurt so much

    ^_~ but im sure you know that already being a hard core navy person!


    ::stages appears while he dresses in a classic outfit::

    and the judges saaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaay

    ::judges hold up all signs of 5::




  • 15 years ago

    by pLeASeTakEMyHeArT

    This made me think of someone right now.. Ooh goddd u r amazing on this.. Wow, deserve a 5/5!

  • 15 years ago

    by Quiet Storm

    I really like this poem, i can relate to the pain you were feeling during this time. I hope everything went well.

  • 15 years ago

    by Mia

    Thank you for sharing so much! I loved reading and feeling it. Very good work

  • 15 years ago

    by Steffini

    I really love this one..