-im sorry about your friend.
but this is a great poem.
it was so deep. i could feel the emotion. .
5/5.

This wa really beautifully sad, I am so sorry for your loss life has it's faults. The emotion you portrayed into this piece was really deep, you wrote sadness in such great depth and I could tell it came straight from your heart as I read each word you poured onto the paper. Such a heart wrenching piece which captured my heart. The flow was perfect to me it didn't faulter at all and the word choice simple yet effective. Parts of this held such vivd imagery which made me see the autum leaves in my mind floating throughout the air, that was beautiful. Well done on writing this it was amazing. Definitly worthy of a 5/5 in my eyes. ~Mel

Very sad, Deffinateally deep poem, It didin't really have much flow or rhyme, But for the deep meaning and for just writeing it out as you went, I Give it a 5/5,

if it was a poem you took hours to do or somthing I would rate it a 4,

Sorry for you're loss,

Wow, greatly written, very heartbreaking. You managed to express emotions excellently through superb descriptions. I like this piece from the beginning to the end, it holds a lot of feelings and greatly created, very vivid imagery.
Excellent job!
5/5 from me

Powerful, emotional, heartfelt, and perfect. You did an excellent job with the vocab the imagey and the flow. the emotion is deep, and strong. I am sorry for the loss of a friend that was obviosly speacail to you. 5/5 although you deserve better

This is a sad piece and the symbolism was great. Sorry about your friend though. The emotion was definitely conveyed well. Keep up the great writes.

Sorry about your friend. this is a very deep poem 5/5 if i could i'll give you more points...

That was beautiful.
Omg.
Lol. But great job.
I am sorry for your loss.
The emotion in this peice was AMAZING! So deep and your pain is expressed beautifully.
Again, great job!
5/5

Amber...

Aww.. this so sad and i'm so sorry about this death.. actually could easily relate on this one, some may picture out it in different scenes but can still capture the right emotions.. great desciption and flow..

Wow. i like this poem, some of it i cant quite understand. and theres a few words that are off. but its a great poem and it flows amazingly. the wording is pretty good. its great 5*5

*wipes away tears* Ah, another delicious sad poem from you, Miu.
The wording was absolutely brilliant, and although the misery of a tragic death hangs in the heart of this poem, your words are still a lovely sight.
I am emotionally touched by this poem, and happy to see you evolving as a poet.
Until your next poem, good luck.

I am so sorry for your loss, however the person who you lost would be proud to call you their friend :D I would be. You've shown passion and love in a consistant manner and everything is shown or reflected as it were in a positive light, I really like this poem. I wouldnt change it as it comes from your heart to a special person :D xxx alex xxx

Oh, my... this is so sad...
and so well written as well...
i know what you mean...
i've seen that kind of feeling in my best friend's eyes, when i told him about my wish for suicide...
this just took my heart away
5/5
keep on writing
*isabel*

Wow this poem is really emotional. And you are a great poet.5/5

Sorry about your friend, but this poem is beautiful.
5/5

What am i supposed to say about this? beautifully mastered in every word and thought! im sure this commentwont matter that much to u, but, u are the master poet to me! hugs! 5/5

So filled with emotions and thoughts. I like this poem. If improved, would be great. Keep it up.

Wah wah its realy interesting poem , keep writing like this , I dont know in which thoughts did you write this poem but I get it for my tragedy and I have lots sad moments which can bee seen in your poem. good job and best of luck

Aww i am so sorry that the cause for such a beautifully sad poem is such a deep and tragic event, i'm sorry for that. but this is a really good poem, full of emotion...5/5
- ali x x x x x

Awww, im sorry about your friend T_T if there is anything I can do to help im here ^^ but good poem

5/5