A hug and a kiss

by Steve_G   May 4, 2004


A hug and a kiss
Is all i need
A hug and a kiss to cope
To cope with what life can throw
A hug and a kiss
Is all i need
To reasure me that your still there
A hug and a kiss
Is all i need
To show me that you still care

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  • 19 years ago

    by Ashley Morris

    Great poem! I love you're poetry. I hope to read more soon. Keep up the wonderful work.

    Love,
    Ashley

  • 19 years ago

    by LiL One

    Yes sometimes a hug and a kiss can make it feel all better and I really liked this poem becuase it is the truth...LiL One

  • 19 years ago

    by PnQ Mod Account

    Awesome poem! I kinda like the shortness of it... it really says a lot in just a few words....but it would be good as a longer one as well....

    I was thinking that maybe you accidentally put this line in "A hug and a kiss to cope" But then I realized what you were doing... (rhyming cope with throw, which is fine) You have such a nice, unique format here...and I think it just needs a little tweaking to be perfect... How about this for the first two sets:

    A hug and a kiss
    Is all i need
    To enable me to cope
    A hug and a kiss
    Is all I need
    To handle what life can throw

    That will keep the format even....

    It really is a great poem though!

  • 19 years ago

    by heather

    hey hun gr8 poem u r a very sweet guy luv ya luv heather

  • 19 years ago

    by martynsgirl

    yeah what they said