My horrible devil

by rhonyl   Sep 29, 2007


I have told you words
that brought me darkness
i shared you my time in the world
but I end up alone with sadness

i thought being with you
would lead me to heaven with my angel
but you slapped me to death
and carried me to hell with you as my devil

what guts do you have?
to ignore my love my dearest
you are so beautiful to me
but for what you did you are so devil but the fairest

i wish you a horrible Christmas
for you have hurt me so much

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  • 16 years ago

    by Krissymkitty

    I really like this poem...i can relate...

  • 16 years ago

    by Vanessa

    Heartfelt words of the soul. well written, try reading your poem out loud after not looking at for a couple of days, to spot place where the flow is a little rocky. step up the vocab, to add power to your emtion, other than that good work 4/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Finalgravedigger

    I can relate to this poem i know what you mean trust me 4/5 maybe u can read one of mine.