Awe. . . this was amazing. the words
are simply perfect.

This was beautiful, Honestly such a gorgeous piece you have written here. The title caught my interest was unique and different. Your word choice sweet holding such amazing emotions which you portrayed deeply into this poem. From start to finish it kept me interested and I didn't get bored at all. For one of your first non ryhme poem this was outstanding. Well done. Keep on writing I suggest you write more pieces like this as you did a fantastc job. 5/5 ~Mel

This is a beautiful and peaceful piece.. actually i can't really get the real idea in here.. are there second thoughts in the relationship (is that what are you trying to portray in here?) but this one is really sweet..

Clever title, great poem

your servant
atticus