If only....

by XdangerouslyXgenuineX   Sep 30, 2007


If only we could have made it work
you knew how much
i have started to hurt

if only the times could change
we could wake up
and be back in yesterday

if only i knew what it is
that i did to you
if you knew how much i am missing you

if only the lies i told were
never told
the guilt i feel was not because i let you go

if only there were enough promises
that we could keep
if you knew how badly i wanted
you to return to me

if only the last of our lies had nothing
to do with each other
if the love we have was
meant for the other

if only you knew how much it is
that i feel for you
if you knew
that i still need you.

if only we had known all of this before
then maybe darkness wouldnt be
welcoming with open arms
for the final and last kiss.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Teria

    Punctation is needed in this poem, I believe. I can't even spell it though, so yeah. Lol.
    The I's should be capitalized.

    Other than thsoe few minor things the poem is great.
    I loved the 'If only" repetition.
    And, the emotion that you gave in it was amazing.

    Keep it up, darling.

  • 16 years ago

    by Reaper

    Wow thats a sad poem.

  • 16 years ago

    by Tara Kay

    I'd never say this was one of your best because i am sure you know that it isnt.
    Although it is sweet and slightly sad, the emotion is lacking somewhat and i think the repetition of "if only" was a little over the top.
    While this was a good poem, it could be miles better.
    Tara-Kay
    x
    P.s. Hope you appreciate that this is my honest opinion, and don't be offended.

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