While your gone

by XdangerouslyXgenuineX   Jan 4, 2008


I thought i had cried
my last tear
over your departure
yet i found myself
crying once more
except this time
i am sure i felt
your hands
gently brushing
each tear away
i heard your voice
whisper in my ear
"my sweet darling
what is it that you fear"
i felt your lips
ever so softly
sweep over mine
and i heard you
whisper again
"i love you
while i am here
and i love you
when i am gone"
it has been so long
since that night
and i await the
lightest kiss
from you
once you have returned
each night
if i dare to cry
i hear your voice
softly whisper
"baby i love you
when i am here
and i love you
when i am gone"
if the tears subside
your voice
fades away
and if they continue
your voice
promises it will stay

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  • 16 years ago

    by Marsha Brown

    Hey i was wondering if u still needed a title for your poem. man I was liking the poem. I was thinking of maybe TORN. even if u never mentioned the worn, it is the definition of the poem. u were torn between allowing him to stay and continue to hurt u r just let him leave and still continue to hurt u.

  • 16 years ago

    by Kayla

    Ky... this poem was so sad. I mean, it was good, full of love, but the emotion I felt whenever I read this was saddness. I think the right title for this would be "Love You When I'm Gone" or something like that. It was very sweet and had a very nice flow. Keep it up darling. 5/5 <3 <3 <3

    ~Kayla~

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