Mystic Carnation (Collab)

by OHgreenman   Sep 30, 2007


By OHgreenman and Andrea Sunny
Doditsu Collaboration

melodic spirits sparkle
romantic kisses ignite
whistling harmonic songs
embracing two hearts

paired souls dance infinitely
carrying poetic tunes
reminisces long ago
loving memories

inhaling angelic tears
moon secrets illuminate
dragon flies protect spirits
absence becomes hope

celestial names written
intersecting threads of time
connecting spiritually
two unite as one

*this was a pleasure to write with you as I've never done this form before*

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  • 16 years ago

    by Ingrid

    Paired souls dance infinitaly
    carrying poetic tunes

    My favorite lines, well done!

    5/5 Ingrid

  • 16 years ago

    by NyellMoonlight

    Wow, I'm speechless! Excellent collab, whole poem is beautifully written with superb descriptions from the beginning to the end. I like the choice of words and imagery in the whole piece, simply breathtaking.

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