Lost

by Vincent Thornsberry   Sep 30, 2007


I am lost
You were my star
and now you're gone
I threw rocks when none could see
I put on a mask every time you looked at me
Now you're gone and i am lost

@ Vincent Thornsberry 2008

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  • 16 years ago

    by HaileyHelen

    Short and sweet and sad all in one! lost... 1 of mii favorite words!

  • 16 years ago

    by Sweet lig

    It was so short poem but it means a lot!
    great emotions though .....5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Taylor

    Great effect. I like it a lot:)
    although it's short it gets the point acrossed.

  • 16 years ago

    by Taylor

    Great effect. I like it a lot:)
    although it's short it gets the point acrossed.

  • 16 years ago

    by Teria

    "and now your gone" << you're.
    capitalize your I's dear.
    And, also.. I think that there should be a stanza break after the line I copied and pasted
    It would give the reader time to comprehend.. the change.

    Good poem, though.
    Great emotion in such little words. (:
    Amazing job.

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