My Mum

by Nalin   Oct 1, 2007


I hoped and prayed
that there was a day
that my mum would return
and come back to me,

i would pray
day after day

sitting in my room
and missing her so...
and i now know
i can never ever let her go...

R.I.P

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  • 17 years ago

    by Roxy

    I agree with everything everyone said above. It may be a short and simple poem but it tells a story about your mother in some way. God Bless xxxxxx Much Love from Roxy xxxx

  • 17 years ago

    by Airika

    Thats good...you should never let go of sumthing as percious as your mom...great poem=D

  • 17 years ago

    by Fabz

    Wel am new to dis and i dnt write perfect all da time, minor ting!

    Really nice poem tho 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by JayJ

    So short and said so much. Very cute! It's perfect! Forget the capitalize "I" !!! you have the right to slack a little! *smiles* 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Zisto

    Love your work, you could improve much (Capitalize I) and if you continue writting you could write really good stuff. 4/5

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