Thunderstorm Tears

by dollwithafrown   Oct 1, 2007


A trickle of tear glosses my skin;
The rain outside has started.
It flows so strong; I cannot stop,
I've been left so broken hearted.

I cannot help but scream out loud;
The thunder has surely began.
This boy that I once loved so strong,
He took my heart and ran.

I lie in bed, and refuse to move;
The skies above are grey.
The storm is slowly moving,
Yet my pain won't go away.

I'm trying to go on, being strong,
But this boy took what was mine.
I've lost my heart, but I'll get it back,
And once again the sun will shine.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Teria

    It was an amazing poem, darling. I felt it could have been longer, because . . . it was missing something?

    What was there though, was amazing. Great emotion. PERFECT flow, and great rhyming. You did a wonderful job, hun.

    Keep it up.
    5|5

  • 16 years ago

    by ECILA ice

    Yeah a sad poem but full of hopes and courage that one day you'll regain and win back what was once gone.. i like the set up and how you end the last stanza. although it's not so powerful, you still manage to make it a flawless poem.. good work!!

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