Your Hardships Make You Who You Are

by Just Lucy   Oct 2, 2007


Your hardships make you who you are
So never doubt the soul you hold
The inner strength and fields of courage
Make me see you heart of gold

Your hardships make you who you are
So never think that I’m not there
Your wisdom and guidance with strength shine through
Theres a world of people who will always care

Your hardships make you who you are
And I know you’ve been through enough
But hold your head up high with pride
Even though life can get a bit tough

Your hardships make you who you are
They introduce you to what life can hold
But inside yourself I see so much more
Than just your exteriors mould

Your hardships make you who you are
So never question the things you think
Without knowing who you are inside
Life will change… in a single blink.

(C) Lucy Green

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  • 16 years ago

    by Beauty In The Breaking

    That was wonderful Lucy :) Very true but still a hard lesson to learn =P Very nicely put and expressed like everything you write though :) Another 5/5 :D
    *hugs* ~*Rhea*~

  • 16 years ago

    by hadia

    Thats a nice poem =]
    I agree. Your hardships make you who you are.

  • 16 years ago

    by Teria

    "see you heart " << your **
    "Theres a world" << There's **
    "mould" << I'm not sure if that's right. I thought it was 'mold' but it may not me. Lol.

    Okay, darling. I loved this poem, the flow was FLAWLESS, and I mean flawless. The meaning to it was so powerful, it made me want to cry. (: Honest to God, it's an amazing, amazing, amazing poem.

    Kiu.
    (:

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