Wow. just wow. thats a beatiuful way to go away from the world. rrly. <333

Wonderfully written, you really have a way with words! So sad and the ending sounded so peaceful....keep up the good writing!

Aww this made tears come from my eyes!!! This was soooo good tho!!!! Great job hun

Aww. kyle! that was so good!
~hugs you and hugs you lots more~ =)

mandy x

A sad but beautifully penned poem.

Keep writing!

5/5 Ingrid

This was a beautiful poem && well written.
great fow. .simply amazing. 5/5.

Written very nicely which shows u've got lots of talent ;)
i loved it, very powerful,very simple, an amazin masterpiece =)

You are such a good poet! I envy you. I try to do the same on paper but this is where you succeed by a mile. Have you ever thought of making a book of your poems?

Wow its so deep, but its really!!! i hope feel better, and kno that gods always there for u!!! I love the poem, keep up the good work

Dat good
lik it
lots

Wow powerful write
i liked it alot
keep it up!

I love it! its writen very well and it has a good flow to it

Beuatifuly written, you have a way with words. :) emotion so easy to understand.

I agree with madz above.. and well written

Great poem.
it really touched me.

Oh i started to cry...that was such an amazing poem, so beautiful!!! 5/5

I almost cried
I loved it
im adding this to my favorites

Wow!! im like..speechless. this poem is amazinggg!! i loved every word, so inspirational && spiritual. i loved it!