Like Rain (Senryu)

by Bryan   Oct 3, 2007


Like Rain (Senryu)

These tears fall like rain,
flooding this desolate room,
slowly i'm drowning.

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  • 16 years ago

    by HOLLYWOODxBANGBANG

    Aweh, that was sad. With a Senryu, you`re kind of restricted to little imagery and description, but I think you did a great job with what you were given.

    5.5
    :]