Promises, Promises

by Gasttlee   Oct 4, 2007


Vows
voice solemn sound.

Commitment
comes with compact.

Hope
holds hard at heart.

Once shattered,
they break as bones.

Statements stir
stiff as steel.

Promise pulls power
and power can be pushed.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Cella Bella

    Short and very powerful. The flow was quite beautiful. Another orginal and wonderful write. 5/5

    marcella

  • 16 years ago

    by 4 track demo

    Slightly different approach, which i like alot...
    big fan of diversity in writing....i loved the way you wrote it, the message was a little lost to me any way...but i still thouroughly enjoyed it....good job

  • 16 years ago

    by debbylyn

    I like this one from you......it has some very deep meaning if I read it correctly....

    Vows
    voice solemn sound.

    Commitment
    comes with compact.

    ^ Awesome lines......all the best, Debbie

  • 16 years ago

    by Cindy

    Very intense and deep. Word choices are great.
    Take care Cindy

  • 16 years ago

    by David

    So powerful the way you set it out, it was excellent, well done. i have missed reading your very insightful poems...

    5/5 David

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