Dear Love

by FoR3V3R HiZ   Oct 4, 2007


I truly believe that I am obsessed with you.
I am fascinated with the way you make a perfectly sane person do crazy things.
I am your biggest fan,
The one who stood up for you when everyone said you was not real.

With you, life is not always peaches and cream.
At times you tend to irritate me, but I still put up with you.
Why is it that you keep me up at nights crying?
Crying because you chose to abandon me.

No one is sure of you,
Some are afraid of you,
But love, I adore you.
Adore you I will until the end of it all.

Love, you are the best thing that ever happened to me.
You gave me the ability to love him the way I wanted.
You are the reason I am forever his.
It is all because of you, I am in love.

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  • 17 years ago

    by Marc Ortiz

    I think it's a good poem, you have some lines that need a little waxing though :) well it's alright.. but the flow is a little off at some lines :) anyway.. I have one suggestion =D

    I truly believe that I am (obsessed) with you.
    = in love
    ^^ It's more sweet/romantic or whatever you call it.

    Nonetheless it's a great poem, keep up the good work

  • 17 years ago

    by Nula

    Love the expression, great poem

  • 17 years ago

    by Jason

    You do a good job of expressing your feelings in writing. I'm impressed a male wrote this.

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