Take my pain

It's like a river of red
A crimson stain
A cloud of black
A torrent of acid rain
All it is
is my pain
Like a wound
that can't be healed
Like a opening
that can't be sealed
is my pain
Like a cut
from a knife
like a bruise
all black and blue
is my pain
And now
I'm asking you
with arms around you
please
take it away

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