That other girl..

by Helene   Oct 5, 2007


You've been trying hard to love her but you can't,
Cause when you sleep it is not her that you are dreaming of.
And you've been trying hard to leave her but you can't,
Cause she is so good to you and
She should be who you really love.
And every night you see the face of someone that you miss,
Pretending all you ever wnted was a life like this.

And now the woman of your hopes is standing close to you,
But you keep thinking of that other girl that you once knew.
Falling in love is not that easy when your heart is dying,
but you know she is so good to you so you just keep on trying.

NOTE: It is not done yet, still working on it.

Yours
Sember Ardens Obsession

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  • 16 years ago

    by *Charisma*

    I like the last line (as of right now till you write more) It adds a little finalization to the piece. I do think your flow needs some work, but the point of the poem is what i like.
    Charisma*